| Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) | |
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Thunderstar StarClan Cat
Mood : Might have to remake all my characters since I've been off for about a year :/ Posts : 1988 WCW Points : 32871 Thanks Points : 5
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| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 17th 2014, 7:20 pm | |
| Spoiler, I'm already writing the fourth chapter. | |
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Adderfang StarClan Cat
Mood : Hope everyone's doin' ok Posts : 8880 WCW Points : 43635 Thanks Points : 24
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 19th 2014, 5:36 pm | |
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Thunderstar StarClan Cat
Mood : Might have to remake all my characters since I've been off for about a year :/ Posts : 1988 WCW Points : 32871 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (80/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 19th 2014, 7:06 pm | |
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Bloodtalon Cheerer Upper
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| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 21st 2014, 10:26 pm | |
| Chapter 6
I pondered and pondered all the next few sunrises. Soon, one night, I asked to take a walk with Gustyfoot. She nodded, hesitating, but we walked alongside the river. "Gustyfoot, I would do anything for you, you know that. I glared at the river and dug my claws deep into the ground. "But it seems that you won't do the same!" I launched at her and threw her in the river. She shrieked, but was cut off as a wave hit her. I gritted my teeth. It took every bone in my body, every nerve, every muscle, every instinct not to jump in and save her. But it wasn't enough. Soon I pulled her out of the river, and she coughed up water. I didn't know how to react, and I'm not sure she did either. But I didn't let my guard down. "Be my deputy, or I won't save you this time!" I protested. "I don't need your help! You don't rule the Clan yet, so stop acting like it, and act like a GOOD deputy!" "I... ugh!" I felt like an idiot, considering she was right.
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Adderfang StarClan Cat
Mood : Hope everyone's doin' ok Posts : 8880 WCW Points : 43635 Thanks Points : 24
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 22nd 2014, 7:13 am | |
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Thunderstar StarClan Cat
Mood : Might have to remake all my characters since I've been off for about a year :/ Posts : 1988 WCW Points : 32871 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (80/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 22nd 2014, 1:25 pm | |
| You don't need to say sorry. I don't really care. :/ | |
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Gustyfoot StarClan Cat
Mood : Guest
DO YOU LIKE TACO'S?
Why, I love tacos, Gust Posts : 7012 WCW Points : 33516 Thanks Points : 5
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| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 23rd 2014, 7:46 am | |
| O.o go Gustyfoot you hang in there | |
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Adderfang StarClan Cat
Mood : Hope everyone's doin' ok Posts : 8880 WCW Points : 43635 Thanks Points : 24
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 23rd 2014, 8:08 am | |
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Gustyfoot StarClan Cat
Mood : Guest
DO YOU LIKE TACO'S?
Why, I love tacos, Gust Posts : 7012 WCW Points : 33516 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 24th 2014, 12:48 pm | |
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Gustyfoot StarClan Cat
Mood : Guest
DO YOU LIKE TACO'S?
Why, I love tacos, Gust Posts : 7012 WCW Points : 33516 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 24th 2014, 1:57 pm | |
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Adderfang StarClan Cat
Mood : Hope everyone's doin' ok Posts : 8880 WCW Points : 43635 Thanks Points : 24
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 24th 2014, 3:21 pm | |
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Thunderstar StarClan Cat
Mood : Might have to remake all my characters since I've been off for about a year :/ Posts : 1988 WCW Points : 32871 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (80/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 24th 2014, 7:33 pm | |
| I don't think there is a next one. :P | |
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Gustyfoot StarClan Cat
Mood : Guest
DO YOU LIKE TACO'S?
Why, I love tacos, Gust Posts : 7012 WCW Points : 33516 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 25th 2014, 4:17 am | |
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Adderfang StarClan Cat
Mood : Hope everyone's doin' ok Posts : 8880 WCW Points : 43635 Thanks Points : 24
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 25th 2014, 7:35 am | |
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Bloodtalon Cheerer Upper
Posts : 6273 WCW Points : 326773 Thanks Points : 33
Character sheet Health: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 25th 2014, 9:03 am | |
| Chapter 7
For the next few days, Gustyfoot didn't even look at me. That was fine by me. Spiritwhisper approached me, a worried and nervous look on her face. "I-I need to talk to you, Bloodtalon, but please, don't tell anyone... please..." I nodded and mewed, "Somewhere where only I can hear?" She nodded and we went beside the river. "I'm having kits. And they're a BlizzardClan warrior's. They're Icyfoot's." Spiritwhisper's head drooped in shame and I slapped a paw across her face. (I'll edit it later.) | |
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Gustyfoot StarClan Cat
Mood : Guest
DO YOU LIKE TACO'S?
Why, I love tacos, Gust Posts : 7012 WCW Points : 33516 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 25th 2014, 12:25 pm | |
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Bloodtalon Cheerer Upper
Posts : 6273 WCW Points : 326773 Thanks Points : 33
Character sheet Health: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 25th 2014, 12:29 pm | |
| Bloodtalon doesn't approve of teenage moms.... Spiritwhisper would technically still be a "teenage" in cat age, considering she is only fifteen moons in the normal roleplay. | |
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Gustyfoot StarClan Cat
Mood : Guest
DO YOU LIKE TACO'S?
Why, I love tacos, Gust Posts : 7012 WCW Points : 33516 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 25th 2014, 12:35 pm | |
| Yo blood for yewberry's rampage I was wondering whether ivypelt- gustypaws grandma- younger sister could be twigleap making gustypaw and yewbeeey cousins? | |
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Bloodtalon Cheerer Upper
Posts : 6273 WCW Points : 326773 Thanks Points : 33
Character sheet Health: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 25th 2014, 12:49 pm | |
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Gustyfoot StarClan Cat
Mood : Guest
DO YOU LIKE TACO'S?
Why, I love tacos, Gust Posts : 7012 WCW Points : 33516 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 25th 2014, 12:50 pm | |
| Yeah I thought it might add some more action and dramatic scenes | |
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Adderfang StarClan Cat
Mood : Hope everyone's doin' ok Posts : 8880 WCW Points : 43635 Thanks Points : 24
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 25th 2014, 3:08 pm | |
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Gustyfoot StarClan Cat
Mood : Guest
DO YOU LIKE TACO'S?
Why, I love tacos, Gust Posts : 7012 WCW Points : 33516 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 26th 2014, 4:02 am | |
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Adderfang StarClan Cat
Mood : Hope everyone's doin' ok Posts : 8880 WCW Points : 43635 Thanks Points : 24
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) March 26th 2014, 7:28 am | |
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Gustyfoot StarClan Cat
Mood : Guest
DO YOU LIKE TACO'S?
Why, I love tacos, Gust Posts : 7012 WCW Points : 33516 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (100/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) April 1st 2014, 1:37 pm | |
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Thunderstar StarClan Cat
Mood : Might have to remake all my characters since I've been off for about a year :/ Posts : 1988 WCW Points : 32871 Thanks Points : 5
Character sheet Health: (80/100)
| Subject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story) April 1st 2014, 6:58 pm | |
| Noooooooooo. *Points finger near Ninjakin's face* We can't tolerate that in here. | |
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