He slammed a paw to the side of her head.

She fell, "oww."

"Never give away weaknesses." He kicked her.

"Oww!" She reappeared (can you be on tomorrow 8:00)

"Fine. I'll break it down. You never say 'owww' in battle. It shows that you're hurt."

Goldenpaw didn't awnser, she wanted to prove him, she darted to his side, sliced it before backing up a few places

Goldenpaw blinked

This time, scarlet liquid trickled down his side. He staggered and darted forward.

Goldenpaw dodged feeling tired

Blood ran down his paw, making his silvery white fur pink and red.

Goldenpaw dodged another blow and suddenly, her breathing problems kicked in, she rasped for breath

He smirked and darted at her neck.

She fell back to dodge it and her breathing problems just became worse

He collapsed. Blood oozed off of him.

Goldenpaw scrambled to her paws quickly and tried to find a way out, she ran towards the edge of the forest but some forcefield pushed her back

Bloodsplash was too weak to follow. He chased her a long way, and collapsed again.

Goldenpaw banged on the forcefield, "let me out!"

"You'll have to wake up, first, kit."

"How the heck do I wake up," she asked then added "sir?!" At the end

"You'll have to figure that out for yourself."

"Helpful." She muttered sarcastically

"No problem." Bloodsplash shot back.

Suddenly Goldenpaw awoke to a strange prodding in her side, fox star was prodding her.
She'd overslept.
"what?" She looked at her mentor, blood had covered her paws

"Time to tr-" He saw her bloody paws.

Goldenpaw got up weakly "can I see mintwhisker first I've got to ask him something, its really important!"