Shard flicked her tail. "His name is Raven. He came from the WolfClan territory. I've seen him once before before joining DewClan."
Raven thought this was Bloodstar and blinked at Gustyfoot before dipping his head slightly in respect.
Shard blinked at him.
"I may be a rogue but I still know that a leader should be respected," he said.
Shard sighed. "This isn't our leader, this is Gustyfoot, our deputy."

Greystorm sat off the the side of the camp, yawning.

Gustyfoot his her smile before dipping her head slightly back to him, "everyone deserves respect." She said to the bigger warrior "now shard," she turned to the half cyborg cat, "what has he done so wrong that you had to bring him here?"

She flicked her ear. "He trespassed. Even I know how badly that can effect the clan."

Greystorm say them and walked towards then.

"Wherever a rouge goes its classed as tresspasing. You were a rouge before you joined weren't you?" (aant gust to ask whether he wants to join the clan or no?)

Pebblepaw sat by Aquasky, watching Gustyfoot, Shard, and Raven. "Who's that?" Pebblepaw asked
"That's probably a rogue that Shard found," Aquasky said, curious about him too
Pebblepaw shuddered a bit. "Shard kinda scares me a bit."

Shard "hmphed" slightly and looked away, not answering.
(Yeah)

(Does he need a warrior name.)

"Raven," gustyfoot said, "it is against the code to tresspass, but since you are a rouge and everywhere is tresspassing. Im giving you a chance. Woukd you like to join our clan? If not you'll have to go and if we see you again im afraid our cats have the right to attack you."

(Nah he's sevenish moons xD)

Raven hesitated and looked at Shard, who's eye had focussed on him, then looked back at Gustyfoot and nodded slightly

"eelcome to our clan raven! Would you like your name to be ravenpaw or kept the same?" She said

(O-O I thought you were talking about Pebblepaw xD Sorry)

(Ok reworded post:) "would you like a warrior name raven?"

Bloodstar trotted into his territory.

Gustyfoot bowed her head to him respectfully "this is raven blood star, he'sjoining us."

He looked the cat up and down. Strong. "Of course." His tail swept the ground. Laleskew padded next to him, deagging her tail along his side.
"Can we go on a walk, sir?" Lakeskew mewed. Sadly, she was to scared ro call him Bloodstar. Bloodstar let out an irritated sigh. He was tired. He lashed his tail.

"I'm tired." He snapped. She looked at her paws as if to gain sympathy but she got none from him. Just a heartless reply. "Ugh...fine. If we must." He nodded to Gustyfoot in respect. He would make a fierce leader, and a good clever one, but he was sure an abusive mate...

Lakeskew had her head down, following him instead of walking beside him, her swollen belly nearly touching the grass. "What is this nonsense?" Bloodstar muttered, stopping beside the river. He was clearly nothig like his father, who in earlier days might have drooled over the silvery she-cat.

"I just thought we could sit out here and enjoy the night..." She ventured. "The stars are pretty and the moon is shining on the water..." Bloodstar stared at the water hollowly. He didn't reply. She flattened her ears.

Gustyfoot sighed as the two left, she didn't like blood star much but she had to remember her family was on the line if she didn't obey. Its not that she was to cowardly to stick up to him she just didn't want to be the cause of her family's destruction. She closed her eyes I feel sorry for lakeskew

(I feel like his past mate or Bloodtalons's past mates should pop up and dissaprove...xD)

(Or gusty I hate abusive people, *glares a waffle* you make to many mean cats, weather was one of the only nicest ones and you turned her insane! XD)

Bloodstar looked across the river at BirdClan and WolfClan territory. He remembered he and Dragonfly twirling around the clearing as if to dance. He remembered them singing, I don't dance, but here I am, spinning you 'round and 'round in circles... He sniffled and Lakeskew pressed against him and twined their tails. Bloodstar had a soft side, she realized. The only reason he didnt love her was because his heart was ripped away. From a little cough...

(Bloodstar is actually the sweetest cat Ive ever made. He just growls fhrough his soft side. And Weatherstep in the end nuzzled Shadowstar and vanish xD She was HELPING WolfClan xD)

Shinekit lay in the nursery. He stretched out

(She killed loads of cats :( you can write the best about evil cats XD)

Gustyfoot missed iceshard, nightstone and her kits badly, she wanted to see them!
I'll sneak off tonight

(Yeah...its fun making sad backstories.)

Bloodstar soon fell asleep, sprawled out in a patch of ferns under a maple tree. Lakeskew sat beside him, sympathy for him radiating from her. Bloodtalon appeared beside him. He murmured, "I am sorry. I loved Drgonfly." (Its not Bloodtalon speaking. Its what Bloodstar is thinking. TALON doesnt like Dragonfly. ) He vanished. Lakeskew settled down beside Bloodstar and theh both fell asleep.

Gustyfoot slowly got up and snuck off, she passed the maple tree blood star and his sleeping mate were she tiptoed towards the boarder and sat there waiting.
Iceshard found her, "hey get off our- gustyfoot?"
"shh." Gustyfoot hissed

Greystorm saw Gustyfoot and snuck up behind her. "Hey." He mewed in her ear, purring.(I feel strange now..xD)