Bloodsplash's Terrors

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors May 31st 2014, 4:28 pm

Chapter 4

Bloodsplash glared at the high-stump. He should be talking to his Clan there. Someday he would. He was determined to have that happen. He gazed at the stars. Tomorrow, he'd be at a Gathering with he and his brothers names being cheered by this time.
Jadepool suddenly stumbled out of the Elder's den she was confined to earlier. "Bloodkit, Foxkit, have you seen Ashkit? You're father needs to scold him. Ashkit! Ashkit?!" She called. That idiot. Bloodsplash thought. He knew she didn't know what she was doing anymore, but she acted so stupid sometimes.

Comettail looked at Foxtooth and Bloodsplash and Ashblaze. "Come on. Vigil is over. Time for a patrol and then you can rest until tonight." He beckoned them over with his tail and they went out. Jadepool followed. Bloodsplash gave a heavy sigh and rolled his green eyes. Foxtooth and Ashblaze gave him a glare and he returned it to his brothers.
"WolfClan attack? Ambush! Ambush!" Jadepool howled. Suddenly, Sagepaw came over, along with Ivypaw. Bloodsplash gazed at Sagepaw and Ashblaze gave the same mooning look at Ivypaw. They calmed Jadepool down and took her back to camp.
Foxtooth looked at his brothers. "Okay, love birds. We're checking borders, not she-cats." Comettail chuckled as the two swung around, looking embarrassed.

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors May 31st 2014, 9:12 pm

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors May 31st 2014, 9:14 pm

Remember, not supposed to do that XD

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors May 31st 2014, 9:19 pm

Dang it >.<

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors June 1st 2014, 5:13 am

Yay! Ashblaze, that's a cool name by now he would'be been realising how he didn't look like his mother or father and then BAM your struck by lightning! XD

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors November 2nd 2014, 10:43 am

Sorry to double post but are you going to finish this?

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors November 2nd 2014, 10:45 am

Probably not but maybe ill finish another time

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors November 2nd 2014, 10:46 am

Aww because I love this story so much

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors March 19th 2015, 9:07 pm

Chapter 5

Bloodsplash and newly named Sageear sat by the river that ran through the territory. He stuck his paw in the waves, just to feel the cold water tug at his fur. Sageear giggled and he glanced to his side witj w chuckle of his own, blushing in embarrassment.

"You're like a little kit, just itching to get in that water," she grinned. He snickered as she plunged in, swimming over towards him. "The water's fine, you can come in with me, you know." Her violet-blue eyes glowed in the shadows and looked at his forest-green ones.

He swept his red-gray tail around as he spoke. "But the water is co-" He waz cut off as she pulled him in by the tail, laughing. He looked as if was amused, but he hid it. Still laughing, she licked his soaking forehead and touched their noses together.

He drug his paw along the top of the water and splashed his mate and she splashed him back and soon they were play-fighting in the waterlike kits.

Bloodsplash woke up in his nest. He laid there for a minute, staring at the moss flecking on his paw. A tear welled up in his eye. He had been to rude to Ashblaze. His father hated him and his mother didn't know him. Foxtooth was to cocky and acted better than him. Sageear was in her own little world...

He didn't wanna get out of bed today. Or any other day.

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors March 20th 2015, 3:10 am

Cool blood

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors June 19th 2016, 9:12 am

Are you gonna start writing again aoon?

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors June 20th 2016, 12:44 am

Maybe sometime or i'll restart it

Subject: Re: Bloodsplash's Terrors August 31st 2016, 1:20 pm

Bloodsplash's Terrors

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