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 Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 17th 2014, 7:20 pm

Spoiler, I'm already writing the fourth chapter.
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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 19th 2014, 5:36 pm

O.o
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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 19th 2014, 7:06 pm

No wait, the 11th.
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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 21st 2014, 10:26 pm

Chapter 6

I pondered and pondered all the next few sunrises. Soon, one night, I asked to take a walk with Gustyfoot. She nodded, hesitating, but we walked alongside the river. "Gustyfoot, I would do anything for you, you know that. I glared at the river and dug my claws deep into the ground. "But it seems that you won't do the same!" I launched at her and threw her in the river. She shrieked, but was cut off as a wave hit her.
I gritted my teeth. It took every bone in my body, every nerve, every muscle, every instinct not to jump in and save her. But it wasn't enough. Soon I pulled her out of the river, and she coughed up water. I didn't know how to react, and I'm not sure she did either. But I didn't let my guard down. "Be my deputy, or I won't save you this time!" I protested.
"I don't need your help! You don't rule the Clan yet, so stop acting like it, and act like a GOOD deputy!"
"I... ugh!" I felt like an idiot, considering she was right.

(Sorry this was short)

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 22nd 2014, 7:13 am

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 22nd 2014, 1:25 pm

You don't need to say sorry. I don't really care. :/
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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 23rd 2014, 7:46 am

O.o go Gustyfoot you hang in there

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"I will fight! I will! I will fight until my heart stops beating and my paws stop working! You look upon me and see just a tiny cat! But you do not see the fighting spirit! You know why I fight even when there is no hope?! Because my clan is my hope and I made a promise. A promise that I would protect everyone in nightclan, and I intend to keep it! The clan may not make a cat but the cats make a clan and we are Nightclan!"

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 23rd 2014, 8:08 am

xD
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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 24th 2014, 12:48 pm

Next part

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"I will fight! I will! I will fight until my heart stops beating and my paws stop working! You look upon me and see just a tiny cat! But you do not see the fighting spirit! You know why I fight even when there is no hope?! Because my clan is my hope and I made a promise. A promise that I would protect everyone in nightclan, and I intend to keep it! The clan may not make a cat but the cats make a clan and we are Nightclan!"

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 24th 2014, 1:57 pm

Next part

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"I will fight! I will! I will fight until my heart stops beating and my paws stop working! You look upon me and see just a tiny cat! But you do not see the fighting spirit! You know why I fight even when there is no hope?! Because my clan is my hope and I made a promise. A promise that I would protect everyone in nightclan, and I intend to keep it! The clan may not make a cat but the cats make a clan and we are Nightclan!"

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 24th 2014, 3:21 pm

O.o
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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 24th 2014, 7:33 pm

I don't think there is a next one. :P
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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 25th 2014, 4:17 am

Next part!

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"I will fight! I will! I will fight until my heart stops beating and my paws stop working! You look upon me and see just a tiny cat! But you do not see the fighting spirit! You know why I fight even when there is no hope?! Because my clan is my hope and I made a promise. A promise that I would protect everyone in nightclan, and I intend to keep it! The clan may not make a cat but the cats make a clan and we are Nightclan!"

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 25th 2014, 7:35 am

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 25th 2014, 9:03 am

Chapter 7

For the next few days, Gustyfoot didn't even look at me. That was fine by me. Spiritwhisper approached me, a worried and nervous look on her face. "I-I need to talk to you, Bloodtalon, but please, don't tell anyone... please..."
I nodded and mewed, "Somewhere where only I can hear?" She nodded and we went beside the river.
"I'm having kits. And they're a BlizzardClan warrior's. They're Icyfoot's." Spiritwhisper's head drooped in shame and I slapped a paw across her face.
(I'll edit it later.)

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 25th 2014, 12:25 pm

O.o

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"I will fight! I will! I will fight until my heart stops beating and my paws stop working! You look upon me and see just a tiny cat! But you do not see the fighting spirit! You know why I fight even when there is no hope?! Because my clan is my hope and I made a promise. A promise that I would protect everyone in nightclan, and I intend to keep it! The clan may not make a cat but the cats make a clan and we are Nightclan!"

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 25th 2014, 12:29 pm

Bloodtalon doesn't approve of teenage moms.... Spiritwhisper would technically still be a "teenage" in cat age, considering she is only fifteen moons in the normal roleplay.

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 25th 2014, 12:35 pm

Yo blood for yewberry's rampage I was wondering whether ivypelt- gustypaws grandma- younger sister could be twigleap making gustypaw and yewbeeey cousins?

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 25th 2014, 12:49 pm

Sure.

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 25th 2014, 12:50 pm

Yeah I thought it might add some more action and dramatic scenes

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"I will fight! I will! I will fight until my heart stops beating and my paws stop working! You look upon me and see just a tiny cat! But you do not see the fighting spirit! You know why I fight even when there is no hope?! Because my clan is my hope and I made a promise. A promise that I would protect everyone in nightclan, and I intend to keep it! The clan may not make a cat but the cats make a clan and we are Nightclan!"

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 25th 2014, 3:08 pm

O.o
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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 26th 2014, 4:02 am

XD

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"I will fight! I will! I will fight until my heart stops beating and my paws stop working! You look upon me and see just a tiny cat! But you do not see the fighting spirit! You know why I fight even when there is no hope?! Because my clan is my hope and I made a promise. A promise that I would protect everyone in nightclan, and I intend to keep it! The clan may not make a cat but the cats make a clan and we are Nightclan!"

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   March 26th 2014, 7:28 am

*Hums to elevator music*
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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   April 1st 2014, 1:37 pm

Next part

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"I will fight! I will! I will fight until my heart stops beating and my paws stop working! You look upon me and see just a tiny cat! But you do not see the fighting spirit! You know why I fight even when there is no hope?! Because my clan is my hope and I made a promise. A promise that I would protect everyone in nightclan, and I intend to keep it! The clan may not make a cat but the cats make a clan and we are Nightclan!"

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PostSubject: Re: Bloodstar's reign: His Plans. (Short Story)   April 1st 2014, 6:58 pm

Noooooooooo. *Points finger near Ninjakin's face* We can't tolerate that in here.
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