(I want them to be apprentices now!)

(Okay)
Darkkit noticed Sageear talking with Foxstar, and they both looked at all the kits.

Goldenkit smiled, at sageear but looked uneasy at foxstar

Foxstar beckoned his brother over to them and pointed with hisbtail to Goldenkit.

Goldenkit sank backwards but said nothing, clearly not comfortable with the leader talking about her
Nightkit sniggered quitey so no-one would here

Foxstar jumped onto the high-stump. (I'll have Bloodsplash die later XD)

Goldenkit looked at sageear, with wide eyes, she stuck close to the queen

All the kits were now apprentices, Goldenkit with Bloodsplash, Hawkkit with a she-cat named Willowbreeze, and himself with Clawswipe. (Everyone else can pick their mentor)

Goldenpaw woke up, and instantly filled with dread, nightpaw jumped up her
Eyes gleaming.
Goldenpaw got up uneasyly and walked to bloodsplash

Goldenpaw stood before her mentor,"what are we doing today?"

"I'm showing you the territory and we might join the hunting patrol for an example. I'll bring Darkpaw and Clawswipe along, I guess."

Goldenpaw's eyes lit up, "cool." She was about to ask whether Lillypaw could come but then she remembered she was the medicine cats apprentice..
She jumped to her paws

(I was actually about to say Lilypaw and I remembered XD)
Darkpaw was complaining. "I want to hunt nooooow!" Clawswipe sighed and muttered under his breath.
It wasn't in earshot but he whispered, "StarClan why..."

Goldenpaw blinked at him, then turned to bloodsplash, "I our territory full of rivers? Because warriors are always bringing in fish."

"Only one river. It's huge, but there are trees as well. Little stream flow here and there."

"Is the river dangerous?" She asked

"It's not safe for cats who can't swim, lets just say. Don't go near it. Even cats who can swim, for them, the current is strong." Clawswipe gasped. Darkpaw was doing just the opposite.

Goldenpaw instantly tackled darkpaw knocking him away fom the river, she slipped on the rocks but regained her balance, "mousebrain!" She growled at darkpaw

Bloodsplash seemed to glare at his son. Darkpaw was going to argue but that glare shut him up. Clawswipe quietly scolded Darkpaw, but then looked at his father like he was crazy.

Goldenpaw padded back to bloodsplash, licking her paw quietly

Soon they walked farther along the river. Darkpaw stopped a moment, a bit dizzy. He saw a cat much like himself with a scar and amber eyes instead of blue. He saw a silvery she-cat drowning. He gasped before blinking and heading on. Bloodsplash and Clawswipe looked at the tom, puzzled, before looking at each other. Bloodsplash shook his head, embarrassed, while Clawswipe muttered, "Why..."

Goldenpaw shook a thought out of her head, why did she keep seeing a small black she cat with a brown paw, ear and a star shape on her neck? She put the thought out of her mind

(Oh, by the way, since Darktail wasn't TRULY evil until his days as a new warrior, he has strangely the normal StarClan symbol. If you read how on his vigil he got angry at StarClan, a claw-mark appeared on his star)

(Cool) Goldenpaw sniffed, the air

Bloodsplash led them to the forest.